Evidence that Fran may have learned to identify a sparrow at last
Here's a poem about nature that I wrote this morning although my observations were made from the warmth and safety of the indoors as regular followers will not be surprised to hear.
A morning in March
The neighbour has frisbeed
stale slices
of bread across his scraggy
lawn
beneath the apple tree, its
branches winter-bare
save forgotten Christmas
lights.
But the birds can take
incongruity
with more grace than I do.
First come the pigeons, plunging
in like gossips
to a whispered
conversation.
One triumphs away a whole
slice
which hangs uncertain from
its beak,
wondering if it will survive
the journey.
The sparrows arrive next, flitting
up down up down
as though on the end of a
conductor’s baton.
They peck-kiss at the
slices,
checking left and right
for rivals,
then dart upwards as
though caught thieving.
Last, a robin, a lone actor.
It observes from a branch
until the sparrows have
flecked away,
then hops to the middle of
a slice,
its cheeky breast applauding
against the white of its
stage.
'You mean, she actually recognised us?' |
You have very fluffy little sparrows, ours are trimmer, leaner. Perhaps yours are babies still, or carrying winter coats.
ReplyDeletePerhaps your sparrows do more workouts. The ones round here just gorge on bread and seeds all day.
DeleteOh this is lovely! You describe the birds so well 😍 My favourite part is the line about the sparrows flitting up and down as though on a conductor's baton. I can just see it!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Deborah! That's my favourite image in it too.
DeleteWhat a fab blog! I know sparrows, chaffinches, pheasants and woodpeckers. Oh and robins. That's about it.
ReplyDeleteYou're doing better than I am! But neither of us will be asked to head up the RSPB ;)
DeleteThat is a jolly good poem. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you! That's high praise!
DeleteI do enjoy watching the birds from our window, they really do have their own style and Im sure conversation with nature - Ha.
ReplyDeleteMy blog here
They definitely chat away!
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